Commentary on your writing: I was a bit surprised by the writing style of your article at first. Then I realized: Kazeta is an art-piece and you are writing a “the arts” article on it. I think that this was the correct choice for the topic, but I found it hard to appreciate because coming from a link in the “Linux Gaming” community I was expecting a gaming or tech article instead. That would have had stats like how fast games load from “off” to “playing”, some example builds and prices for making an ideal Kazeta, a review of how hard it was to make your own SD, etc.
I think the mental space I’d put this in is like a Rolling Stone interview where you’re writing lyrically about Alkazar and his work while weaving in paragraph quotes from him.
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Commentary on your writing: I was a bit surprised by the writing style of your article at first. Then I realized: Kazeta is an art-piece and you are writing a “the arts” article on it. I think that this was the correct choice for the topic, but I found it hard to appreciate because coming from a link in the “Linux Gaming” community I was expecting a gaming or tech article instead. That would have had stats like how fast games load from “off” to “playing”, some example builds and prices for making an ideal Kazeta, a review of how hard it was to make your own SD, etc.
I think the mental space I’d put this in is like a Rolling Stone interview where you’re writing lyrically about Alkazar and his work while weaving in paragraph quotes from him.